All about me!

I am learning to write an autobiography about myself I will be successful when I can Use a plan to generate ideas for my story (Y-chart) Introduce who I am Describe what I look like, what I like to do and some interesting facts about me. Include WOW words in my writing Begin to revise and edit my work

Ko Keziah toku ingoa Ko mamaru te waka Ko parata te rangatera Ko mangonui te kura Ko ranikapity te maunga Ngatikahu te iwi Tena koutou katoa Hi my name is Keziah Erstich. My mum’s name is Shelley Erstich.  My dad’s name is Shane Campbell. I have six uncle’s three from my mum’s side and three from my dad’s side .I have two step sisters Mia and Skye and they are both married to my brothers Luke and Isaac. I hav

Two Stars and a wish

Write an “I am” poem

I know I can do this when I Use the template to write my poem Write each line in full sentences        Use punctuation correctly like A . , !

I am Keziah I wonder if I can become an actress I hear bees buzzing in the morning I see artwork from my class I want a puppy or a kitten I am Keziah I pretend my name is rachel I feel awesome I touch my hair and my dad's beard I worry about my cat because she is an inch from death poor rachel I am awesome because i'm laughing I understand everything I say  a lot I try to eat everything sweet apart from lycerish I hope my nana wins the lotery I am KEZIAH and AWESOME

Two Stars and a wish I had some ideas to raise money for getting a puppy or kitten or more  lego or o give half of it to Emma for her to get a horse .

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